"Thats it im tired of all this pain and torture! You cant convince me to stay in this hell any longer!!!" i say this to my friend who is crying on the other end.1
"No stay! you cant go ill miss you!"she says to me through her wasteful tears.2
"NO!!! tell everyone at school i will miss them." and without a breaths hesitation i hang up the phone. i begin to weep. i will miss them i think over and over again, but this time i will not turn back i will make to THE hell. it must be better than this place!3
I hold the bottle of sleeping pills in my hand, and one by one they go in. i count 1..2..3..4..5..6..things start to get dark as i take more and more of my end...8..9..10..i stop, the end of the bottle.4
things start getting dark. im on my way to the blessed eternity."oh dear life i leave thee in peace" i yell out to the end..to the death5
i fall to the floor in a piled mass i hear footsteps "mom?" to weak to cry i black out.6
i awaken to a bright new day.7
"DAMMIT!" I cry out, i cannot serenade my beautiful ending as ive wished for all along.8
i sob..im alive...9
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thanks...i wasnt sure how to spell it so i spelled it the best i could...i appreciate your help *smile*
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no its not its just what i think of doing sometimes...i might actually do it...who knows
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Rawe
This was a good piece. I found two grammatical errors (The spelling of "torture" as "torcher" and the "thy" that ought be replaced with a "thee") but aside from those, I highly enjoyed this piece.
I enjoy your motto, too. Good onya. -
Yeah, my friend said that when she woke up in the hospital it was the worst feeling ever, 'cause she knew she was still alive. I wouldn't know, is this a true story? if you don't mind me asking, you don't have to answer of course. Great Write!
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Wow... I'm sorry... is this true? If so.. I'm realy sorry.. *sigh* if not... good
lol This was a beautiful story
~Amy
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comment please
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