What's worse?

The water ripples at my feet,1

The sun beats on my back.2

The air warm, moist and humid. 3

And I want the heat to go away. 4

The feelings sink low and down, 5

Arrogance beats on my mind.6

My emotions; confusion, hate and sorrow7

And I want the pain to go away. 8

The water, 9

Cold and uncomfortable to feel10

Against my now hot skin. 11

But what do I fear more?12

Heat or cold?13

My emotions, 14

Sad and mad to strike15

Against my fragile mind. 16

But what do I fear more?17

Sorrow or hate?18

The waters rising, slowly and taunting. 19

And the heat goes away. 20

Cold embraces my body21

But what’s worse? Cold or heat?22

The sadness increasing. Tears and mourning.23

The anger pushed away.24

And the sadness takes over.25

But what’s worse? Mad or sad?26

Save me from drowning in cold water.27

But don’t put me back in the heat. 28

Save my mind from the sadness,29

But don’t push it back into being mad.

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  • The Golden Son
    February 27, 2008

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    Aiigh. I know exactly what you mean, and I think that may be the better route. Too much anger will make you do stupid things, and that means regret will follow.