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I am not a big reader1

But I will write.2

Don’t hold me up,3

I am afraid of heights.4

You can let me down,5

It’s happened before,6

But don’t leave me crying,7

On your bedroom floor.8

The words that you once spoke,9

They kept me alive.10

How you once loved me…11

To find it’s a lie.12

What can I say?13

That hasn’t already been?14

If you love me now,15

What will happen then?16

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  • NinjaMegami
    May 5, 2008

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    awww

    this is so sweet! i wanna make a good poem, too!


  • Dirty and Broken
    February 17, 2008

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    hmm...interesting...i read it through twice....i like it...it's pretty...in a weird kinda depressing way....anyways, i'm ranting now...it's a beautifully sad poem...


  • Ted E Bare
    February 14, 2008

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    I hope you can have a happy Valentine's Day and allow your heart to heal from a love that seem like did you wrong. There will be a heart out there somewhere that will treat yours the way it should be treated; loved for infinity.

    Ted E

  • werner1221
    February 13, 2008

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    good. simple rhymes with a deep message.
    favorite part -
    The words that you once spoke,

    They kept me alive.

    How you once loved me…

    To find it’s a lie

    good.