"I, Princess Elizabeth want a kitten" I told my daddy, King William. I called him and said "can you get me a kitten?" "I'll think about it." replied my Daddy.
"But it's my 10th birthday!" I said eagerly."I know." he said. He laid a box down with my name on it. I opened the box and found a six week old kitten. I guess I told him earlier that week. I promised to take good care of her and to snuggle with her every night. We love watching television every Saturday morning together. I wanted Tiger Lily to have a friend. I wanted a rabbit, but when I remembered that rabbits and cats are enemies, it was too late. I had them together. Tiger Lily chased off Daisy into the woods. A dog, then followed. I recognised that dog. It was Buddy, her neighbors lost dog! I chased after the animals. but soon I got caught in some branches. My mom sent knights out to find me. They found me crying because my animals were gone.
That night, the most weirdest thing happened, Tiger Lily came home leading Daisy! I was happy to have them back. 1
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Fantasy
A contest entry
- ages 12-15 only ♥real or fantasty? by miles of smiles.
900 points, ended February 20, 2008, 10 entries
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hi! my name is sarah, and thank you for entering my contest.
however, i don't think you understood it completely, and i'm sorry if it was my fault. maybe i didn't explain it clearly enough. i was actually looking for a cliche love story- this was more in the actual fantasy genre. for the fantasty option, i was looking for something you wished would happen. a cliche.
this is still a cute, easy, short and fun read. however you may want to check over your grammar and spelling.
i'm not going to DQ you, but your not going to place. thanks anyway for entering! let me know if you change your entry.
♥sarah
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