Motto

Life is like dominoes: build, fall, repeat.

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This has been my motto for literally years. ^_^

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  • Dreams of Insanity
    April 29, 2008

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    Wow...so simple yet...yet...wow!
    Haha I loved it, and it's so true. No matter how many times we build and no matter how many times we think we're stronger, we inevitably fall, and repeat that same process again and again.


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    February 17, 2008
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    Mind if i take you up on your motto... at least at the end we are stonger


  • Ted E Bare
    February 14, 2008

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    I think it has been a motto that has proven to be true for many people. I know I can vouch for this one. Glad to see it in here. I truly want to thank you for entering my "If StoryWrite had a Motto Space for Writers" contest!

    Ted E


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008
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    Good motto. You're right too. That pretty much sums up life in a nut shell sometimes.