[ Everlasting1 ]

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Everlasting--

What the heart wants but rarely gets.

A contest entry

• Odin by JuliaAlexandrovna. 350 points, ended February 25, 2008, 13 entries
  Bronze trophy winner
  • next story in this contest, remove from contest

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• zoralielda
  June 14, 2008
  
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  That was deep...
  
  Very deep...
  
  and emotional.
  
  So beautiful!
  
  A little mixture of many different feelings
  
  but definitely a good read.
  
  keep it up!
• Shadowed Phoenix
  February 18, 2008
  
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  This stirred up a lot of emotion, a lot more then most stories do. It made me sad, yet longing, bitter, yet hopeful. Kinda weird, so many mixed feelings.
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  Disposable
  February 17, 2008
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  That was deep.... and made me aks a lot of wuestions about life for some reason

  
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    AllOuta
    February 18, 2008
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    it made me ask questions about myself so i feel ya!
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  StarDragon
  February 13, 2008
  
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  Very nice, though like a moron, I read everlasting as part of the poem. *deep sighs at self* Yes, well it's late.

  
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    AllOuta
    February 13, 2008
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    and that's your excuse Star?
    
    LAME~
    but thanks for the claps
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      StarDragon
      February 13, 2008
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      Did we miss the moron part? *grins*
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  JuliaAlexandrovna
  February 13, 2008
  
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  I almost cried. Well done. Beautifully said. And very true.
  
  Thanks and good luck.
  
  x Julez
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    AllOuta
    February 13, 2008
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    glad you liked it! And great idea for a contest! I had some real fun with this one