Am I who you think I am?

My wings, are slightly gray, and blue. Gray, the colour of loneliness, tiny twinges of it, throughout my life. Twinges of loneliness, I took it all in strife. The blue, for calm, to everybody else. Blue. A corner of my wings are black, angst ridden, on other's behalf. A slightly lighter gray, for boringness. But that is how I think others see me.1

My soul is also blue, but a much darker, the colour of tears. The former, my wings, an ocean blue. But the colour of my soul, is a deep blue, the colour of tears, and sadness. Some parts are green, for longing, longing to be free. Some are a light pink, for my need for someone to be there for me. Another is a slight mint green, for a little tiny bit of inner peace.2

Am I who you think I am anymore? Am I who you thought I was for sure? My personality, thats for time to see. Only time can tell, for I will change.

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  • abba12
    March 25, 2008
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    i love the image youre placed in my mind, ive got an image of them in my head. However, I think you could potray it better. this seems very jolty and contradictive. prehaps help it to flow on better, rather than jumping here and there. Good work, a beautiful image, you could just potray it a little better