It was a day like any other, most of my friends were spending their time looking for guys and walking around looking desperate, I never was like those kind of girls, instead I was at home, as usual, watching tv. I was growing bored by the minute so I decided to surf the net, get on and check all my profiles, like myspace, and all those other sites that claim to be like no other. I all of a sudden remembered a site that I hadn't been on in a while, it was called teenspot. 1
When I logged in and saw I had a new friend request and a message I have to admit I was surprised. They were from the same person, they had the screenname of "ice20". In the message he complimented my eyes and said he was new to the site and was looking for friends, he seemed to be a nice guy so of course I added him, a nice guy is hard to find these days.2
We talked on MSN for a while, I didnt keep track but probrally a couple of months, he talked about his girl problems, and I talked about my past. Slowly but surely I fell for him. He asked me out and I said yes. We talked more and more, and I grew fonder of him by the minute. Then one day he said "I think I'm falling in love with you" I almost started crying, never did I imagine that me, the average girl, would find true love.3
Now we are engaged and really happy, dont get me wrong we have our problems, but nobody's perfect right? I know we will be together forever. So I can honestly say my first true love will be my one and only.
Author notes
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Ted E Bare I'm not sure if its what you wanted but I wanted to tell my story. thank you for reading it.
A contest entry
- Your First Love by Ted E Bare.
175 points, ended February 15, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Awwww that's sweet. I like this. It's good lol. I like the way you write too so that's a good sign that your doing your job. Keep up the fantastic work!
~Blazing Mike~

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Lovely story, mate. Absolutely. I sorta thought that the guy would turn out to be a rapist or something, but I guess that's my imagination working overtime. But I am glad for you.
Well done.
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That sounds great! I love when people can fall in love by talking first and get to know each other. It' a much better chance of being together years down the road. I do hope you both the best. I truly want to thank you for entering my "Your First Love" contest!

Ted E
PS: Happy Valentine's Day even though it's almost over.




