My arms were wrapped around his neck and my fingers were lightly playing with the hair that laid on it. My hazel eyes were looking up into his beautiful brown ones with flecks of green. He was looking down at me and his arms were lightly around my hips. "You really do look amazing tonight." He told me gazing deeper into my eyes. My legs were turning to butter and I knew I would have collapsed if it wasn't for him holding me. 1
"Thanks," I said silently back. "You look really good too." 2
Even though the lighting was dim I could still see him blush. God he was so cute. He was 6’3 and I was 5’2 and I loved how I felt so protected in his arms. He pulled me closer and closer to him as the song went on. Soon I was pressed against his chest, breathing in his strong scent. He rested his head atop of mine and I closed my eyes as I slowly moved with him. 3
“Chantal,” he whispered.4
I opened my eyes and looked up at him, “Yeah.”5
Brendan just stared down at me and gave a little lick to his lips. He didn’t say anything, but slowly moved his head down, closer, closer, to me, never losing eye contact. I stared at him too and as he bent down closer I stood on my tip-toes a bit so I could be closer. 6
Closing my eyes I relaxed my lips and waited for his to touch mine. But they didn’t.7
My eyes rapidly fluttered open and I looked up to see nothing but my plain white ceiling. A groan of sadness and embarrassment passed my mouth and I rolled over on my side. 8
“I’m such a loser.” I mumbled. “He’ll never even look at me like that, in his eyes we are and always will be friends.”9
Author notes
please don't ask for a sequel or anything. I started doing that on another series and that was just too much to keep up with
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Amazing Poet you are
WHAT no Sequel just kidding! I brag about you to my family, how young and amazing writer you are! -
Yay! I like it. But those dreams do come true. Mine did. Never lose hope.
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Well, good luck with your story writing. I usually just write about somthing that happened to me and make it a bit fictonal. Yeah, ok, hope that helped a little.
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awww... that's sweet
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dude ive had dreams like this!!! except they were about my boyfriends...and involving a diff place....and hes shorter then me...ya isnt it sad when your boyfriend is like that and all you can do about it is dream...people suck....anyway this is a really great story and i agree im trying to write 2 stories right now and its slowly killing me lol.
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aww that's sad
*sniff*sniff* glad u liked the story.
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b-e--utiful
i loved this and it was so sad.. i've had dreams like that except in mine they usually end up leaving ... like the one on the bridge... i was standing on the bridge and .. we shall call him A. well A walked up to me and held me close staring out at the beautiful water fall ahead ... he slowly turned me i looked at him and he began to inch closer to me... he rested his cheek on mine and whispered "i love you Amber.." and he moved back and then in towards me and i closed my eyes and i felt his touch diminish... i opened my eyes and felt the mist of the water fall and he was no where to be found... i turned towards the waterfall and gazed at it again feeling his lingering warmth on my skin i smiled.. and slowly awoke... *sigh*
love you
God Bless
Amber
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