You look into my eyes as I look into yours; and you can feel the love that pours from my heart into yours.1
"I love you, and I always will," you say quietly; your voice quivering from the intensity of our feelings, "Do you love me?"2
I turn to you and say,3
"Love can't even begin to describe the way I feel about you.4
When I wake up in the morning, you're the first thing on my mind; and when I go to sleep, you're the last thing I ever think of.5
When you get really close to me, my heart beats at the speed of light and I can hardly breathe; but when I do, every breath is filled with your sensational aroma.6
When you talk to me, I get lost in your eyes; feeling nothing but everything at the same time and all I want to do is kiss you and make you feel the same way.7
All the years of loneliness before I met you, I always wondered why I was always alone, never having a lover or anybody that loved me at all; I thought there was something wrong with me...8
But... now I realize the truth."9
"And what's the truth?" you ask, with tears in your eyes; knowing how I feel.10
"I was just waiting until I met you." I said to you six feet under the stars.
A contest entry
- 10 sentances or less ; anything by Melli.
170 points, ended February 15, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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That was very well written. Not many people can get out and describe their emotions like that. Especially love.
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Beautiful!
This is really beautiful. Your description is great and I can feel your emotion. Great job. :]
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Thanks very much.
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Oh, what a beautiful story! I wish one day this is the love in my heart...not some highschool, over-dramatic, crush. You wrote out REAL love in just a few words and that right there is utterly amazing. It cheered me up! And your description was just right for the contests rules. I wish you luck!!! It sounds like gold to me!!!
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Aww, thanks.
I'll definitely read yours and return the favor, after I get home from school later!
But thank you though, it came straight from my heart and onto this site.
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