All I need for christmas (part 2)

Amber held her steaming cup of tea tight in her hands. Alicia, her friend that she met at a teaching course, sat opposite Amber. Jake stood by the sink, watching Alicia comfort Amber. 1

"He loves me Alicia, I know he doe's. It's my fault. Shopping." Amber whined, gently sipping her tea.2

Alicia stared at Amber and shook her head, tears slowly lacing her eyes.3

"get a grip Amber. This is classic. That sicko is beating you and your taking the blame, you know you've done nothing!"4

"How do you know?"5

"You've never been in such a long term relationship. Then Carl came along and your so keen to keep the love alive that your willing to put up with his abuse! Come on, you can do better than him!"6

There was a moment silence. Jake turned to look at the girls, he could have whipped out a knife and used it to cut the tension. Slowly, Amber rose up, placing down her tea, she clenched her fists until her knuckles were white. 7

"Your so annoying! You think you know me! You really think you understand me. Back off, I'm telling you now, no one tells me how to think!"8

"Amber, calm down, your stressed..."9

"Dam right I'm stressed, you telling me what I'm thinking! You think I can't think for myself. I don't need this. I'm going back where I'm loved, home."10

Amber threw on her coat and kissed Jake on the cheek, thanking him for being so kind. Jake savoured her smooth lips on his skin, he felt as though he would melt at her touch. 11

As Amber began to walk to the door, Alicia's chair scrapped against the floor ad she jolted up.12

"But your not loved by him, your his punching bag."13

After a moment of skin crawling silence, Amber turned on her heals, threw down her bad and launched onto Alicia. She began to claw at her face with her sharp nails. Jake dropped his mug to the floor, allowing it to smash as he went to separate them.14

"Stop this now! Amber, get off her please!" Jake pleaded, trying to prise her away.15

Alicia screamed, enduring the pain, not retaliating. Eventually, Jake pulled Amber away. Alicia slowly rose, red marks on her face. The fury slowly faded from Amber's face as she slowly broke to tears. Alicia pulled Amber from Jake and led her into the lounge. Jake looked bemused but knew whatever Alicia had to do, was most likely right.16

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  • Vampyric Lust
    November 22, 2004
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    dude what i dont get is why alicia is being all nice after amber was just all on her and shit i would have gotton up and kicked her ass out onto the fuckin street...but thats just me i dont put up with shit unless there is a damn good reason...

  • Dutch Doll
    November 22, 2004
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    wow, interesting little cat fight there.. nice bit of drama for the story.. i like the read , you are good at telling stories

  • TragicFlaw
    November 22, 2004
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    omg... hahaha that totally sounds like something i would do and its creepy because my name is amber and the characters name is amber... its just creepy lol and friends have told me that about this guy who says he loves me.. we aren't in a relationship and its not exactly the same but its close... and... whoa... you'd better continue my dear i need to know what happens to me!!!! *bites nails* lol
    much love
    God Bless

    Amber

  • LovedIntoExistence
    November 22, 2004
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