The mixture of sugar and spice, wings and soul, just me.

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My wings. My wings are gold; they're fulfilled with good energy. They hold all the colours of a sunset. They're enormous, they represent my dreams, ambitions, my happiness, my power to step into life and take the best out of it. They are beautiful, drop dead gorgeous. They are like a sponge which absorbs and generates love. They are here for me and whenever I feel low I can hide in their sweet embrace. They are my sunshine; they hold the songs of the angels and my best memories. Their mission is to keep that smile on my face forever and help me race through life like a shining supernova. My wings; they're truly amazing, young and restless, absolutely unbreakable. I love them.2

My wings is what's outside, it's a power which is close to me but not quite me. They're like a best friend; they'll never let me fall. My soul is what truly represents me. Just me. 3

My soul is thin and light blue. She looks delicate and fragile but hell yeah she's a kickass babe. She's like a stream of energy, like a cold drink, always refreshing. She's like the ocean, she's peaceful, she's calm, but once in a while she likes to create a storm. She moves in her own way. She knows exactly what she wants. She has the energy to reach out for all of her dreams. She's like a diary, life writes all over her and all she can do is choose the colour of the ink. Most of all she's loving. Her love is rare but true. Her love is precious and once heartbroken she turns to ice, it’s her form of protection. 4

But enough describing, look at what she has to say about herself:
I'm like a butterfly
Every time you make a wrong move
I panic and fly away
I step towards the sky
Where I hide in my own heaven
And my own peace of mind
You can try to catch me
But you should know
That I am truly the
u.n.r.e.a.c.h.a.b.l.e
I'm not a soldier
I'm a butterfly5

Author notes

I love the idea of this contest, very inspiring and helped me discover myself from that spiritual point of view =P
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Lol, so from this description of wings and soul what kind of person do you think i am? =P

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  • Naive.
    April 1, 2008

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    Loved this! Gahhh, this was great. I loved the description and everything is so well written. This is exactly the kind of stuff that I love to read.

    Great job. :]

    -jj

  • abba12
    March 25, 2008

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    hehe this is really cute and happy. i love the wings being the colour of a sunset, i love sunsets and they vary a lot. very good.

    • sunshinexreggae
      April 3, 2008
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      I love sunsets too ^^ They're just amazing!
      Thank you, this was a really cool contest, loved it


  • Forgotten Anomaly
    February 12, 2008

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    She's like a diary, life writes all over her and all she can do is choose the colour of the ink.

    That line jumped out at me, it was so well writen. I love this, the metaphore, and descriptions. You have talent.

    • sunshinexreggae
      February 13, 2008
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      Hi!
      Thank youu <3
      Yer when it comes to writing I love taking something, pulling it apart and describing every detail too, it's quite fun
      Thanks for your comment I'm really glad you liked it :]
      x


  • Rosemary silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    Good descriptive writing

    I imagined that it was some type of poetry you might hear in a Greenwich Village coffee type nightclub in the sixties.

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