[ I love you ]

I love you, 1

I need you. 2

I cannot survive without you in my life. 3

I will cease to exist.4

Because I need your touch, 5

Your warmth, 6

Your laughter 7

And humour, 8

Your warm smile. 9

I simply need you 10

And love you baby. 11

You are the one 12

I want to grow old with. 13

Just you and me, 14

Old and feeble 15

But still holding hands. 16

I'll love you always.

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ok so i was rumaging tho all me writing, looking for somthing to write to ma man for valentines.. and I FOUND THIS! not sure wen... i wrote it.. wat u think? gud to put in his card?

hmm sound kind of needy to u? =/ hm

[= tell me the truth... is this any good?

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  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

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    Awww I think this sounds sweet and very romantic He is very lucky to have someone like you! I think that sound's like a beautful piece to put in a card!