My "Secret" Quote

A secret is never a secret if two people know, to keep it a secret the other person must die.

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  • Shah Z
    March 6, 2008
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    i defnately don't want to know your secret know


  • briannnnn
    February 18, 2008

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    This made me think a bit! Great job! This is very good, lol. Keep on writing!

    Oh yeah and, good luck in the contest!

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • theDARK1
    February 16, 2008

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    oooooooooooooh nooooooooooooooooo, i didn't want to know this secret for i don't want to die at this moment. i want to live another 259 years, hehehe! great thought process behind this one, DARK.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

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    Very neat comment and very true as well. As long as two people know it really is never truly a secret. This is one clever quote


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    February 11, 2008
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    Don't tell me anything

    How true!

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.

  • sunshinexreggae
    February 11, 2008
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    Oh wow. Now that's powerful. See, as I read the beginning "A secret is never a secret if two people know" I instantly thought of this boy, because we have a little, or even many little secrets between the two of us, and when I read the following something in me jumped. I like it, it's clever.

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