They said to me1
Words that hurt2
Words taht killed3
My freedom spirit4
"Thy shall not feel5
Thy shall no see6
Thy shall not taste7
Thy shall not smell8
Thy shall not hear"9
I could handle10
Those few things11
But the last bit12
The one that delt13
The final blow14
"Thy shall not die15
and Thy shall not love"16
There is nothing left17
For me or my body18
I am left alone19
As an empty shell20
I shall not feel21
I shal not see22
I shall not taste23
I shall not smell24
I shall not hear25
But don't take26
The only things27
That I hold dear and near28
The things that are29
Just another advanture30
Let me keep31
The ability to die32
Let me keep33
The ability to love34
Let me keep35
Those few things36
Don't take away37
My freedom spirit
Author notes
This poem tells of how I feel. Sometimes I wonder if i should even feel like this. I feel alone and lost. I don't know where I am going in this world.
Does anyone else feel the way I do?
Comments
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I love this a lot. It's so good! I bet you anything that so many people can relate to this, including me. That's a very hard thing to do and you pull it off amazingly. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work! Also, please don't stop writing, you are very good at it. Hehe!
Keep up the good work,
-Brian. -
I can relate to this poem a lot. This was great, and I never wanted to avert my eyes from the screen ^^
As it says in your author notes, you dont know if you should think this,
dont worry.
What you feel is what you feel. And I have, and still do feel exactly how you do.
But, always know this, that you will always find happiness in life.
Perhaps some one you really love?
Maybe an amazing oppirtunity will show up?
I dont know.
Feel the way you do and write the poems you write, but always know that you will find some happiness in the end.
Great poem
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