Keep your chin up, even if the gravity around you is pushing it down.
Author notes
I thought of this when I was sleeping last night - I don't want to give away the whole point to the story, but just to let you know, when I say gravity, I do not literally mean gravity.
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wow profound
I really like it mostly because iits true it really makes sense its so to the point i like it alot -
Wow...hmm...I liked this...
I can't place a finger as to WHY, but I like this.
It's deep...and yet at the same time so simple...I really liked this.
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oh ^_^ I thought this would be longer, but okay ^_^ It is nice though, in all its simplicity
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This is awesome. It means so much in just a little sentence. I love it. Inspiration?
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I think that the whole thing is fantastic! and you point is very nice. I love it! I hope you write more things! I always enjoy your writing!
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lol that is so true. My personal sayind is 'did someone order an Apocolypse?' lol not very inspiring though
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You're a very wise kid. I wish that I was as smart as you when I was 13.
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The only big problem with this is the "gravity around you" part. Gravity isn't 'around' you, it's in and above and through and below you. You aren't wrong, necessarily, but it is a little funny. Could you try "even if the gravity pressing you" or just "even as gravity never stops pushing it down."
What an encouraging little line, surely something to live by.
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Nice little quote. I like it.
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We know, it's a quote, dude. You are good at commenting. I've seen you comment two/three days straight. Good job.
I don't see how you do it...
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Huh?
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Idk
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ok? lol
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In other words:
Keep your spirits up, even if the people around you put you down. Am I right or am i right? lol. I like this and you said the whole point of the story. Meaning your writing a story to this or that you refering this to your regular story December 12. Which one? I like this. Keep up the fantastic work!
~Blazing Mike~
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The first part is right! Hehe.
-And I did not write this ABOUT the story, it just came to my mind. But now I see how it can relate to the story, lol. And thanks
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So many people can relate to this, always. Well done!
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I understand your meaning. Purely for me, you understand, I would like to see you expand on this idea. It may be the start of a very good article. Think it over, I could be right.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, dialog: 5.
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