Heyyy, Come Back Here!!!

Hey, there!1

Whatcha doing?2

Hey!3

Why are you walking away from me!?4

HEY, YOU!5

YES, I AM TALKING TO YOU!6

HEY!!!7

Come on, just because I told you to give me some chocolate was enough to make you pissed off.8

HEYYY, COME BACK HERE!!!9

I WAS ON MY DAMN PERIOD!!!

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This was embarrassingly based on real life...

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  • Scop Christiana
    June 6, 2008
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    Ha ha. Funny.


  • IGWooten
    February 11, 2008

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    very good

    HaHa! you presented the tension and irritability of a females state of mind during those bleak days wonderfully.
    Good job for such a short piece, right to the point.

    Sincerely,
    IGW

  • sunshinexreggae
    February 11, 2008

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    ROFL! Periods are stupid they makes us look silly.
    Loved your story though, it's so true, and it made me laugh XD.


  • Amicus2K9
    February 11, 2008
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    Chuckles and a blush...grins...

    Ah, so very cute and 'in you face' "Hey! Yeah, You!", yeah, my favorite saying is, can't be around them a week before, the week during, or the week after, thus, a woman has one good week a month and ya gotta be lucky to find a full seven days....grins....

    Excellent short shot, with truth, humor and amusement in a small package, wonderful!

    smiles...

    amicus...



  • The Boy
    February 11, 2008
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    Funny

    Real life? Thats interesting. Even though it wasnt really a story I still liked it. It was funny.

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