{{see behind the painted smile}} [[ a quote ]]


1

When you look in the mirror, do you see the beauty that everyone else can see or do you see a failure?2

3

Author notes

This, to me, has many different reasons and many stories behind it. How do you interpret it?

erica♥xoxo

A contest entry

. . . ♥ . . .

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

1 - 14 of 14

  • perfect paradox
    June 4, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Wow, love it! *swipes the quote* Mind if I borrow it? I really like this quote!


  • h1ybear
    February 21, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Some would see you as vain if you see the beauty all the time. Most see a failure when looking at their own reflection. I am included in that group that would see a failure.


  • briannnnn
    February 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is so good. It made me think a bit and that's very good. I'm sure a billion and one people can relate tot his. You are a very talented writer, so keep on writing!

    Oh yeah and, good luck in the contest!

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.

    • always feel pretty
      February 19, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      thank you so much! i'm really glad you think i'm a talented writer! *blushes* i love compliments.

      erica♥xoxo


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love this one. It made me think to. I would actually see failure if I looked in the mirror. I have always felt I was one. I think it's wonderful when people can feel they are beautiful, but I have never felt that way. Very thought provoking quote you have.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • miles of smiles
    February 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This is so deep even though it's only- *counts*- twenty two words.

    So many people look in the mirror day after day and refuse to acknowledge the beautiful person that stairs back at them. Everyone, EVERYONE, is beautiful, and everyone remind themselves that they are.

    This is beautiful. You are beautiful. Your writing is beautiful.

    Failure is a word no one should call themselves.

    ♥sarah

    • always feel pretty
      February 11, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thank you. thank you, thank you, thank you! You totally got the message. Yay you!

      you're beautiful too and so's your writing!

      erica♥xoxo


  • I Dare to Dream
    February 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    When I look in the mirror, I see the failure everyone else sees.

    Great quote, really a big eye opening question!

    • always feel pretty
      February 11, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      When you look in the mirror, you should see the BEAUTY everyone else sees.

      Not a lot of people see failure in others, you know. They usually see someone who tried and was unsuccessful, but it'll amaze them that you stand back up and try again. A failure is a person who doesn't get back up, ever. A failure is when you don't fight for what you believe in.

      From what I know, you are not a failure. If someone gave you a bad comment on one of your stories -- would that stop you from writing? No. It'd make you try harder, it'd make you a stronger writer.

      Trust me girl, you are anything but a failure. You. Are. Amazing. Now go look at yourself in the mirror and repeat that to yourself a hundred times. Maybe then you'll see that even people who don't know you know you're beautiful. It's the flaws that make up the beauty in us, not the perfection.


      Wow. Didn't mean to go all...meow on you. I just hate when people put themselves down.
      erica♥xoxo


  • theDARK1
    February 10, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    i would be inclined to agree with the comments in your author's notes. now if i ask myself personally, i would have to answer i see nothing but a bunch of cracks. itz from me looking in it and scaring the mirror, hehehe. i don't think any mirror is safe with an alter ego at a given age of 259 years, DARK.

1 - 14 of 14