My muse.

I close my eyes as I sit with the laptop in my lap, gripping my head irritably. I am trying to think of another story, something that would at least get me one comment. It is so rare when I get more then two views that are not of my friends. 1

I reopen my eyes and glance to my left where a girl is sprawled out in a chair. She has fiery orange hair and large green eyes. Currently she is asleep with a cotton blanket pulled over her body. Her large fox ears twitch slightly and she opens one of her eyes. Clearly she senses that I am watching her. 2

"What is it now?" She asks lazily, obviously wanting to go back to sleep. 3

"I can't think of what to write." I reply. She yawns and stretches in her chair. 4

"Try killing off a character.” She suggests. "Give them deaths that'll make someone cry for them. They could be attacked by an old friend and not want to fight back."5

I nod and turn my gaze back to the computer screen. Within seconds I hear the soft singing coming from my muse. 6

"Rattle big black bones7

In the danger zone8

There’s a rumblin' groan9

Down below10

There’s a big dark town11

It’s a place I've found12

There’s a world going on13

Underground." 14

I tilt my head and glance back over at her. She giggles and starts rambling about how I need more pumpkins and mice in my stories. That way I could have it like Cinderella. I grimace at the thought. 15

My muse suddenly throws her blanket into the air and leaps to her feet. I flinch at the sudden change of mood when she twirls and sings a song from a band named Nightwish. 16

"Once there was a child’s dream17

One night the clock struck twelve18

The window open wide19

Once there was a child’s heart20

The age I learned to fly21

And took a step outside"22

She grabs hold of my hand and yanks me from my seat on the couch. I try to voice a complaint but she starts to sing again and twirls me in place. 23

"Once I knew all the tales24

It’s time to turn back time25

Follow the pale moonlight26

Once I wished for this night27

Faith brought me here28

It’s time to cut the rope and fly29

Fly to a dream30

Far across the sea31

All the burdens gone32

Open the chest once more33

Dark chest of wonders34

Seen through the eyes35

Of the one with pure heart36

Once so long ago." 37

"SHUT UP!" I finally yell at her but she merely laughs and drags me from the room. We run down the hallway (I having no will in the matter) and the walls begin to change. My mouth falls open as I catch glimpses of old forgotten ideas and prose. 38

Unicorns, faeries, figure skaters, leopards, pirates all stare at me from the walls. I can even see the scenery of their stories behind them. 39

My muse has started to sing again but I do not recognize the song. She leads me to a door and thrusts it open. 40

"Welcome to the Imagination!" She yells out cheerfully as she shoves me inside and closes the door behind us. My mouth is fully agape as I stare in astonishment. Before me is paradise I have never laid eyes upon. 41

The sky is a soft orange with dark clouds scattered across it. Two crescent moons that are linked together hang high above my head and brightly colored ships float around them. 42

"How can this be?" I ask as my gaze lingers to a field of purple cotton. 43

My muse shrugs and starts to skip through the field.44

Author notes

Completly idiotic, random, and annoying. My muse for you.

I know this could be better but I tried my hardest not to make it into something serious so that's why it is faulty.

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  • silverpen
    February 12, 2008

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    I love it, what a creative person you are. I find that as I get older I am loseing my imagination.Sad but true, so hold on to your muse.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.


  • h1ybear
    February 12, 2008
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    I like this. It's very interesting how you described your writer's block. Do you like Nightwish?


  • Azaradelle Moderators member
    February 10, 2008

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    Creative...

    I'd be surprised if this didn't win gold. Very imaginitive and light-hearted, yet eerie in a sense.
    A unique portrayal of one's muse. Writers block is a dreadful thing, i'm glad the red-headed inspiration dragged you away from it.
    Well done! You have outstanding talent! Don't stop now!

    Yrs.

    Azaradelle.


  • Richard Paranoia
    February 10, 2008
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    Good

    I like it. The description is great. I wish there was more of it.


  • LadyLionnir
    February 10, 2008

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    Oh, very very creative. I don't think it's idiotic. I loved this idea! Originality always interests me and, man, do you got it! The way you wrote this also comes to my attention: so descriptive...personal yet of fantasy. You truly do have an imagination. Keep up the good work!!!


  • CorvusCornix
    February 10, 2008

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    A very light-hearted and fun piece, Silver! I have sometimes thought of my imagination in this way too, and also sometimes wished it would manifest itself as a world I can just step into. I guess that's why we write, because it's the next best thing.

  • HoneyAngel
    February 10, 2008

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    It was good, very good.

    Not as random as I would hope but it is still very good. Might be in with a fighting shot ^.~

    Points:
    Orange = 30
    Pumpkin = 30 +20
    Faeries = 30
    Bonus for making it serious yet random = 50
    Total = 160

    ^.^ Haha. I like how it is serious yet random. Something I could never achieve.

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