Life

When life doesn’t find a singer to sing her heart, she finds a poet to speak her mind.

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Just because no one had gussed it yet i will have to put it in myself. The philosphy behind it. I'll put in the hint doesn't a singer sings the words of a poet. Damnit your stupid, all of you.

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Twin. They are tw types of twin one look same and the others look a part. When a single egg forms two zygote(I don't study bio no more, so i am not sure if this is the right spelling) but if two eggs are formed at the same time in a single intercourse then the twins look apart.
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  • CallMeWhenUrRich
    October 28

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    Awww, this is extremely sweet and thoutful. I love the sweet touch behind it. Wonderfully written. Thank you for entering and good luck!!!


  • Ayesha Raees
    December 10, 2008
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    sniff sniff
    so true!
    but singers write first before singing! ^^


  • Ninja Bubble
    May 3, 2008
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    Cool, nice, superb.

    "Damnit your stupid, all of you." Says the guy with bad grammar


  • Taylor Renee
    April 17, 2008

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    Thanks for the lesson about twins and fraternal and identical. You explained it weird! But I knew that already.

    Thanks for following all the rules!

    And I absolutely love the quote. It's awesome. It's so true, thank you for calling me stupid. It makes you think so much. I love it.

    Great work!

    Thanks so much for entering my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!


    xoxo
    -♥-
    Tay


  • Hermanator1 silver member
    February 27, 2008
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    Good Parable

    You say a lot in just a few words.
    The running comment from others is correct. It is a grammatical error for example: he finds - they find. In this case, "does" makes life a collective noun so it is find not finds. I still admire your command of a second language.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • briannnnn
    February 18, 2008

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    I have to agree with theDARK1, the 's' on finds got me a bit flustered, but nonetheless this is very good! Keep on writing - you're good at it!

    Oh yeah and, good luck in the contest!

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

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    Beautiful quote I agree with dark it would be so much more powerful without the "s" on the first "finds" I really do love this quote though


  • Ted E Bare
    February 12, 2008

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    Interesting play on the "heart and mind." Good luck in this contest.

    Ted E

    PS: I am hosting a similar contest titled "If StoryWrite had a Motto Space for Writers" if you would like to check it out.

    http://storywrite.com/contest/3822


  • theDARK1
    February 10, 2008

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    thats pretty good, but i think it would be more powerful and flowing if you take the 's' off the word 'finds' in the fourth position of your quote. itz crafty in several ways, DARK.


    ps: please know that i'm not being mean about the 's' but i do think it sounds better without it (only the first 'finds' though, the other is perfect. i have said it aloud both ways several times and the singular 'find' won out every time with me).

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