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DARK vampires kiss2
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itz late on a friday night6
itz as DARK as it can be7
i have my lady by my side8
as we're doing ninety-three9
we love to cut loose10
in my sexy rally sport machine11
head to an open country road12
far away from the crowded city13
hugging hair-pin curves14
our bodies racing with adrenaline15
she starts taking off her clothes16
as her hormones are heating up again17
she plays with my stick shift 18
while we are faster than the wind19
she climbs onto my lap20
and our erotic pleasure begins21
clouds in the DARK sky22
finally break to a full moon23
she and i were speeding with lust24
as we ignored all the rules25
looking in the distance26
it seems my eyes were being fooled27
as i was slowing down28
my baby turns around to look29
before i could completely stop30
a lady leaps in front of us31
i clipped her accidentally32
as she brought me back to reality33
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my baby and i helped her to my car. opened the hatch on the mean ride and put the seat down to where it made a bed. she appeared to be alright, but i was taking her to a hospital to be sure. my baby stayed with her as i kept the rear view mirror on them. she came to and started talking. then complete silence. their eyes connected as their lips met. she began kissing my baby. then they were both naked and i wasn't sure if i needed a hospital or a hotel room. there was something mysterious about this lady. sure, my baby has been up to the possibility of being with another lady, but not under these circumstances. itz almost like my girl was hyptnotized. like she had no control over her actions (like the same way my baby does to me). of course i was getting excited because that's what i do when i see some girl on girl action (which for the most part is a male fantasy). i was told to stop the car by them both and join them. i did as instructed as i pulled off into a field. then what might have been a fantasy turned into a night for an unexplainable event!35
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her kiss became the kiss filled with bliss37
a kiss that me and my girl found hard to resist38
she took both of us into the DARKness39
by her pure euphoric vampire kiss40
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Author notes42
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#1 option for erotica(more like lustful episode)44
this is my 5th attempt at doing a poem/story with a vampire. i tried something a bit different as i tried writing for a specific contest about "cars and vampires." 45
allpoetry.com/ list/3306 DARKs vampires46
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Picture From:
i39.photobucket.com/albums/e190/heatherfawn2001/kiss.jpg
and a personal photo of me beside my car that can be seen in the background of the vampire pic courtesy of YerTweetyness.
Written May 15th, 200648
Author notes
my other four vampire poems can can be seen here:
http://storywrite.com/story/143160
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WOW you sure no where to press a girls buttons or in this case make me press and touch my buttons...I think even the fast action tension sex drive of the vampire fashion was enough to send me into a DARK overload.... touching more and more as this progressed..enjoing it
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Wow. It was like a great movie or book that ends way too soon. It was very erotic. You should write a sequel and continue the story lol. Keep up the great work, my dear stalker.
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thanx for loving it for i greatly appreciate it, DARK.
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he he every guys fantasy, yep, I would say that it would be. Loved this one and the way you had the short story in between the poem is really cool and a neat way of writing. I can vividly picture that one in my wicked little mind. The description in the story part is very cool and the poem in itself is breath taking. I do love your works!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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thanx for your great evaluation for itz appreciated, DARK.
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excellent, you really put it togeather.
I loved it!
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thanx much for your approving words, DARK.
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