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Life is bland without the spice of humor.

A contest entry

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  • Shah Z
    March 6, 2008
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    this is so true you don't need thrills and chills to add humor to life you simply need humor


  • briannnnn
    February 18, 2008
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    Tell me why I read this, and I still found it amazing, due to the fact that I read this before! This is very good!

    Oh yeah and, good luck in the contest!

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 13, 2008

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    Oh my god that is so true! If we didn't have some humor in our lives they would be so incredibly boring! Love this quote here, my favorite so far
    Joann

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Ted E Bare
    February 12, 2008

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    I think it's splendid writing. I wish I could write one like that. It has everything and makes alot of sense. I would think everyone would want to applaud you on this one. Good luck in this contest.

    Ted E

    PS: I am hosting a similar contest titled "If StoryWrite had a Motto Space for Writers" if you would like to check it out.

    http://storywrite.com/contest/3822


  • h1ybear
    February 12, 2008
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    So that's what's missing! It's very good

  • briannnnn
    February 10, 2008

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    Wow. I love how you said so much, with out saying a lot at all. That's definitely a good thing to do. You should keep on writing, 'cause this made me think and it's still making me think till now.

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • theDARK1
    February 10, 2008

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    for what few words you have used here, i'm completely impressed. i love the contrast between 'bland' and 'spice.' humor is what makes many things go well in the world, especially relationships. this packs plenty of punch. this is a made up quote and not one out of a book right? i ask because i think itz that good, DARK.

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