Why waste breath complaining when you could be using it to tell someone you love them?
A contest entry
- DARKs contest for quotes by theDARK1.
145 points, ended February 25, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Quotes and Mottos by Ninja Bubble.
200 points, ended May 7, 2008, 30 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It has a great meaning, but I don't think it's too... realistic. Not everyone has a picture perfect life where they can tell someone they love them and hear it back.
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So you rate my comment 0 for not wanting to partake in the phenomenon that's sweeping the nation by storm called reality? Nice.
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nice, really nice i hop ppl take a depper meaning in than just loving someone, it should be about loving humanity
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This is so sweet, I love it. Great job! This is very good and I wish you the best of luck in that contest you're in!
Keep up the good work,
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Awww that one is very very true! If you love someone I think that you should tell them everyday how you feel. As well as showing them.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Anyone who has ever loved anyone should automatically fall in love with this one. That means everyone who reads it since we have to love somebody even if it's an animal. Good luck in this contest.
Ted E
PS: I am hosting a similar contest titled "If StoryWrite had a Motto Space for Writers" if you would like to check it out.
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i'm shocked that no one has even commented on this one yet! i had to think about it, but itz a clever and great message that holds true. you never know when you may take your last breath and why not use it to tell those that you love just that! again very clever and thoughtful, DARK.
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