Opportunity is chance for you to show the world what your made of. If you dont take it by the neck. i'll do it for you, and use it against you.
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My quote, plez...be gentle =D
A contest entry
- DARKs contest for quotes by theDARK1.
145 points, ended February 25, 2008, 34 entries
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nice
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i tried to be gentle, honest and fair, DARK.
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This is a very good quote! I love it! Very well done and very well written! Although I did see one problem, on the third sentence you forgot to capitalize I'll. Hehe. Well, this is good nonetheless. Anyways, GREAT JOB!
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LOL oh my god that's a really cool quote. I love it!
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Please be gentle with me! I don't want to be taken by the neck and strangled. I would be a dead Ted E Bare if that happened(lol). Good luck in this contest.
Ted E
PS: I am hosting a similar contest titled "If StoryWrite had a Motto Space for Writers" if you would like to check it out.
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please don't take this the wrong way, but i honestly think your first sentence is a better quote by itself. the other two sentences seems to bog it down and negate the initial statement. please don't shoot me for liking the first sentence as your quote, DARK.
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+_+ OOOOooooo me likey a lot.. i love this new direction ur taking
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