Vampire For Hire (Chapter 1)

The rate at which sex Trafficing was increasing in the world was quite alarming. Woman and children daily around the world were missing, kidnapped, used and abused as sex tools. Raped and sodomized, some  beaten and bruised as well as other ungodly unspeakable things. It is a nightmare to parents and loved ones all over the world. This underground disgusting trend is a menace to families and society as we know it.


--Chapter one--
    The Search1

New York
The Present day...
5:30 pm
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Phone rings
"Hello?"
"Yes may I speak with Mr. Kramer please?"

"Yes this is he." Mr. Kramer replied
"Oh hello Mr Kramer, we have received a message from you in regards to your daughter being missing."
"Yes, Yes!" Mr Kramer replied very much thrilled, "She has been missing for 3 days now, My wife and I are so happy you called back! when can we come in to see you to discuss all this?"3

"Well sir that is why I am contacting you now, we will see you at midnight at your address to discuss the details of this matter."
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"I'm sorry did you say midnight?" Mr Kramer said unsure if he heard correct
"Yes midnight tonight, My name is Edward and I am calling on behalf of my boss, Mr. Grin, who will be the one searching for your daughter."5

"I see..., 6

couldn't you come in a little earlier?" Mr Kramer asked
"I'm sorry" Edward replied. "I assure you he is the best at what he does. Only thing is, he prefers to work at night."7


"I see then, Ok my wife and I will look forward to seeing you tonight then."                                 8

            "Very well sir" hangs up.9

It was just about midnight,
As a limo drove up the driveway to the front entrance of a large beautiful mansion where the Kramers lived. It seemed the Kramers were very wealthy to live at such a place.
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"We have arrived sir"
"Very good Edward, Now let let us see if we can help these people." Edward came around the front of the limo and opened the rear door and out stepped Mr Grin, pale but beautiful, his skin was flawless and he was well dressed, well groomed, Mr grin was very particular in looks and attire. They went up a few steps to the door in front of them and Edward presses the doorbell.11

A butler opened the door "Ah yes, you must be Edward and Mr grin, Mr. and Mrs. Kramer are expecting you, right this way please." The butler escorted them to a large beautiful formal living room that had a fireplace. And there was Mr. and Mrs. Kramer waiting Impatiently but relieved all the same.12

Edward walked up to Mr. and Mrs. Kramer shaking their hands "Hello I am Edward, I was the one who returned your phone call. Very pleased to meet you."
Mr. Grin wasn't so quick to greet them however, as he walked around the large living room admiring everything that was within. Beautiful statues, Rare paintings, bookshelves, grandfather clock, marble mantle fireplace. It was grand. 13

"You have a beautiful home" Mr. Grin said with his arms crossed behind him
"Thank you" Mr. and Mrs.
Kramer said in return.14

"So..."
Mr Grin now turned his attention to them.
"let us get to the matter at hand shall we?
"You say you have a daughter who has gone missing for 3 days now, am I correct?"
Mr Kramer replied "Yes, she was with some friends The night she went missing but they don't know what happened to her. They were a bad influence I kept telling her but she wouldn't listen..." He paused, 15

it was difficult for him to continue speaking. Mrs. Kramer rested her hand on her husband's shoulder and took a step forward as she spoke up...."Her name is Casey, and this is a picture of her" she reached out the picture in Mr. Grin's direction. He walked up to her taking the picture. 16

He looked at it for a moment, and replied. "She looks young."17

"She is 13 yrs old" Mrs Kramer teared and whimpered covering her mouth.
Mr grin looked at the picture and repeated to himself,
"hmmm, Casey......13 yrs old." he closed his eyes, as if he were memorizing her in his mind.1218

"Where was she last seen?" Mr Grin asked. Mr Kramer answered "She was at some Gothic nightclub called The Devil's Playground in lower east Manhattan."19


"Very well, I will need just one more thing aside from this picture of Casey."
 Mr Grin said while putting the picture of Casey in his front jacket pocket.
Mr. Kramer eager,
"Yes of course anything...anything you ask."20

"Could you give me something personal of Casey's....perhaps something that has her scent?" Mrs. Kramer answered "yes, I'll have to go upstairs to her bedroom to retrieve it, if you'll Excuse me it will just be a moment."21

Mr. Kramer curiously asked while they waited, "Do you have a dog that helps sniff out trails?"
Edward steps in and replies, "Uh,...yes, you could say that sir"

Mr Kramer shakes his head, "Well, anything that could help would be much appreciated. You can't imagine losing someone you love."
Mr. Grin's eyes bolted at Mr. Kramer responding quickly. "Oh no you are wrong! I know what it's like to lose someone you love! I lost a loved one many many years ago!"22

Mr. Kramer was speechless, and the only thing he could try to say while apologizing was, "I...I'm..., I'm sorry Mr. grin,
I didn't mean anythi...."
Finally Mrs. Kramer comes in and walks directly towards Mr. grin "Here you go! This is her teddy bear, she sleeps with it all the time!"
"Very well, this will do. Thank you,
now if you'll excuse us We'll be on our way."

Mrs. Kramer asked "how long will it take to find her?"
Mr. Grin while walking for the front door says loudly "It will take about a couple of hours, maybe three at the most"

The Kramers looked at each other in amazement, Mr Kramer added,
"But the police said it would take weeks even months to find her." Mr. Grin stopped in his tracks and turned around to look at both Mr and Mrs Kramer. He said confidently "I, am not the police."23

The butler lead them out the door Edward and Mr. Grin stepped into the limo.

"So sir,....where do we go from here?"
Edward questioned
Mr grin replied, "we are going to The Devil's playground my mortal friend."

And so they drove on their way to The Devil's Playground. Edward strikes up a conversation with Mr Grin

"So sir, do you think they suspect anything? Like you being a,.a...," Mr. Grin cuts in, "about me being a vampire?" Edward shakes his head. "yes."
"No not at all, they don't suspect a thing I assure you." The vampire said confidently24

Edward notices Mr Grin looking for something in the back.
"sir if you are looking for something to drink its in the middle mini bar right in front of you. I put fresh blood in the wine bottle there."25


"Ahh thank you my dear Edward."
He drinks. "That is quite good!"

Finally they have arrived at the club. There was a line of people wanting to go in and one big bouncer at the door. Mr grin puts the picture of casey in his pants pocket while He takes off his jacket, shirt and tie, folding them neatly on the seat beside him.
Wearing nothing now but a black T-shirt, black pants as well as shoes. Getting ready for what is to come.
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"Keep the limo running Edward. This will only take a few moments."
"yes sir" Edward complied27

(To be continued)28

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  • Darylion
    October 3, 2008

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    WOW

    Wow, this is aboslutely amazing. Its something new and intersting, I can't wait to read the rest. Great write.


  • NinjaJay
    October 3, 2008

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    hey

    i really like this
    and i thank you for writting this
    this was amazing
    i love the way you wrote it and the detail
    cant wait to read more


  • ainshbu
    October 3, 2008
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    oooooh this sounds good.

  • V l
    March 14, 2008
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    I just love a good vampire story cann't wait for more


  • Bello.Midnight
    March 14, 2008

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    Oh this was a bloody damn good start to a story.. I love finding new stories that just make me want to delve deeply into it..explore every facet of it, and watch as the author transforms it into something magical....

    =}
    Loved it !!!!!


  • vampiresareforever
    March 14, 2008

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    This is intriging! The title was what caught my eye, and I'm glad it did!
    Well done on the silver.
    I'm jealous =) wish I could write like you


  • silverpen
    March 14, 2008

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    well I must admit that I am intrigued to read more of your story.I like that with a few words you paint a picture in my mind. I hope to learn some day how to write like that.So I am going to check out chapter two.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • MoonRoseWolf gold member
    March 8, 2008
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    Wow.....I really liked this, and I am so curoius about so many things! Who is he?, why does he want to find her?, whats going to happen?, and who is his loved one????
    Please keep writing this and let me know when you have new chapter ups, I look forward very much to reading more of this. Well done, and good luck in the contest!


  • FantasyFable
    March 2, 2008

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    hehe! I see you won the silver and rightly so! I loved that, I am very curious as to who his loved one is? there is a story of romance maybe you could have as you were saying about lighter things? insentive or what? lol and right in your story! I wonder how old Mr. Grin is? I am off to the next part to see if I can find out, was very much liking the fact he said he could find her in a few hours when the police said weeks and months bet the parents had there stomachs in their throats with utter shock and relief! brilliant write and I am hooked well done my friend!


  • Friesian
    February 11, 2008

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    O.o

    I've never read anything like this before! I adore the idea of a vampire hired to find a missing girl. It's an exotic concept! I really liked this! Oh...I hope u write more! XD


    • Immortal Flesh
      February 11, 2008
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      Wow just signed on and thank you oh so much for the second place trophy! I am deeply touched! I appreciate your comment very very much, ! ty ty ty!
      I hope I can accomplish the same with the 3rd and final chapter, (which is in the works) Thank you again Friesian!

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