Counting Sheep (six words contest)

Counting sheep puts me to sleep

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  • werner1221
    February 13, 2008
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    hahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha. thats funny s***. haha
    it seems so random.


    • Ted E Bare
      February 14, 2008
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      It Was(lol)! I thought it would be wild for this contest and not have a shot in hell to win just because it was so random, but I liked dreaming it up as I was counting to fall asleep(lol).

      Ted E


  • Blazing Writer
    February 8, 2008

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    I like this one. It's funny and it rhymes. Great for little kids when you teach them about counting. Or when theyre learning to count. Go to sleep and count sheep. and I gree with SeleneStone I would also lose count lol. Good luck in the contest.

    ~Blazing Mike~

    • Ted E Bare
      February 8, 2008

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      Blazing Mike, yep, I put it in here to get laughs for I don't think it has a shot at winning! I like to be humerous at times. Thanks again for such a wonderful comment and the other comments as well! Ted E


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 8, 2008

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    Maybe I should try that when my insomnia hits. lol I would probably just loose count and have to start over though. I suck at math. The sheep might would gang up and attack me for making them start all over he he.

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

    • Ted E Bare
      February 8, 2008
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      I put this one on here just to be funny. Don't think it will impress too many(lol). Thank you for your great commentTed E

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