The Brave Mice

There once was a barn filled with mice1

There was ,also, a very large old cat who lived there2

The cat would catch the mice 3

Eat them, and wear the bones on her neck4

One day a meeting was called5

"Mice," Cried the oldest and wisest of them all6

"We must find something to save us from the Big Cat!"7

The smallest mouse shouted8

" Why don't we put a bell on the cat's neck?!"9

"That;s genius!"10

Cried Mindy Mouse11

" Outstanding, little man!"12

Cried Matthew mouse13

"The best idea tonight!"14

They all cried out:15

Let's do it now!16

Right Now!17

Yeah Let's go!18

"Now," said the wisest mouse,19

"Who will do it?"20

"Not me! Not me!"21

Cried EVERY mouse 22

And they all skittered away to their holes......23

Saying and doing are two different things......24

WB:J25

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  • Hobbit Warrior
    November 19, 2004
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    lol, sucks to be the mice, but I really don't think I'd take on a cat as a mouse either. Half the cats I know I wouldn't take on as I am. Very cute story (type thing?). I like it. Saying and doing are very different indeed.
    Amanda