I walked down the street with the sun shining down on my back. I was happy because I just got an A on a big exam. There was nothing that was going to bring me down. Then I saw him standing there. He was perfect in every way, from the face with bright blue eyes like the sky, to a perfect body. I didn’t believe in love at first sight, but right now I knew it was love at first sight. My body tingled with excitement as I went to introduce myself. 1
Now we are together every single day of our lives. 2
Author notes
there is ur really short story. I think there is 8 sentences. anyways hope u like it.
A contest entry
- 10 sentances or less ; anything by Melli.
170 points, ended February 15, 2008, 22 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
What did u like?
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Nice - best of luck in the contest hun. Do you keep all of your journal entries together once they are written? You could make a story out of them eventually if you wanted to - one big write on all your different journal entries. Just a thought
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Oh, good job. Thanks for fallowing the rules, its appreciated. It's an okay entry for my contest, I'm just not fond of the concept of love at 1st site, but I try not to reject pieces because i dont believe in something. great job and good luck =)
KEEP WRITING!
-Melli <33
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