One Last Drink

I've drank your cyanide too long.

A contest entry

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  • briannnnn
    February 18, 2008
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    This is good. Good job!

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • Ted E Bare
    February 8, 2008

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    Reminds me of the saying about drinking the kool-aid, but yours gives an additional kick to drop someone dead(lol). Good luck in the contest!!!!!

    Ted E