Push, push, skate. Push, push, skate. Look back. Fall off board. Get up. Push, push, skate. Push, push, skate. Look foward. Look back. Friend's yelling something. I'm doing it. Push, push-1
Then I'm not there. I'm on a stairway of somesort. I'm at the bottom, and the only way to go is up. One, two, three, four. I count. Hey, look. Another person appears. OMG I barf. The person walks on. Five, six, seven, eight. And another. This one looks like it has been hit by a ...car? Nine, ten, eleven. More people. Tweleve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen. And some more. "I jumped off the Golden State" one says. Bridge? I wonder. Sixteen, seventeen. "I was stabbed by a cop." says another. Eighteen, nineteen, twenty, twenty-one. I can't move. They all move up, up, up, but my legs won't move. Twen...no, they won't. Tey- I can't; two... help, I have to get to the top! A voice calls out. "No!" No what? "It's not your time."2
I wake up in a hospital. Apparently, I was hit by a car when I was learning how to skateboard. And apparently, that stairway I was on? Was the way to get to Heaven...
Author notes
I have a couple of friends who are like in love with this song. I haven't actually listened to it, but yea. If my friends like it =D Let's see what I can do. (BTW-this is fictional.)
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Comments
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Its obvious that your story isn't taken from the actual song itself, but from the title.. As you say, you haven't listened to the song. Well, I'm not saying that's a bad thing when it comes to the story, but I really recommend listening to the song, as it's one of the greatest songs ever =D So, well, the story was good, and I liked the whole idea, but the whole thing seemed a bit rushed and a little raw..
That being said, I still liked it, and it's a good foundation for something bigger ;D
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