Was That Wrong?

"Well, I have to go. Bye! Love you."1

No kiss? All day? No hug? This felt strange...I didn't like it when the day ended without a hug or a kiss...2

And so I hesitated for a minute, then turned around, "You too." A different answer than usual. She could definitely hear the uncertainty, maybe even coldness in my voice. I didn't want it there.3

"Ok...bye," The question was there, and then she just left. I could feel her remorse, maybe even regret?4

And now I have to wonder...Was that wrong?

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Well, what do you think? Was that the wrong thing to do?

Hmm...Wondering...

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  • LuckyBlackCat
    February 7, 2008
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    perfectly fine..... i would have done that too. hope she isn't mad at you for long.


  • beezy92
    February 6, 2008

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    I like it a lot. It was realy short but the way you vonveyed the feeligs was really believable and realistic and simple and it connected with me. really good...wish there was more but that might ruin the magic (=


  • StarIlluminated
    February 6, 2008

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    I think that was an okay answer. If you're feeling strange, she should know. And you tried to come up with an answer quickly, anybody would've done that. It was perfectly fine
    *KT*

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