Winter's silence

Winter's dead silence erode summer night's memory.

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  • Writing0Freedom
    February 14
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    I love the contrast of winter and summer. It is beautiful and while not uncommon you used it in a original context. I love " Winter's dead silence" and "Summer night's memory" they are just beautiful phrases. Thank you for taking the time to enter in my contest!
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  • Xtclozer-
    February 8
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    Good job. Makes sense, and it is unique