Get Away...

You gave me a fake number1

You told me it was one of my "friends"2

I belived you3

Stop it4

You need to get a life5

Get one where no one cares about you6

I didn't think I would say this but I will....7

Next time you get close to me I will hit you8

Stop with this crap9

I hate how you treat me10

Never do that to me again11

You could have told me in a nicer way... what you ask?12

You know what you told me to13

GET AWAY14

I wold have said it nicer than just do what you did15

I hate everything about you16

And by the way17

Get Away from me you little BITCH18

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I had a rough day at school and that is true what happened! yes know i feel soo much better

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  • lydsweetiepie96
    March 28, 2008
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    I really liked it!!! You could tell you were angry at someone. Good job! Keep writing!


  • Xtclozer-
    March 1, 2008

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    It was under the word minimum, but what the hell? only 6 words under I will accept that. Any way, to the commenting..
    Good job, I could tell that you were very angry when writting this . And, fortunately, that is what poems are for. Expressing any emotion that you are feeling, and this, had a lot of anger.

    Good job, and thanks for entering.