I'm walking in the dark you pounce on me i jump the hair on my neck stands still you stop and stare at me i'm standing still as possible it's raining outside i walk faster. I see a knife come out of your pocket you point it at me i shiver with fear the knife is dripping with blood you almost gag from the sight of blood staind eye's you try to look away but you can't your drawn to me i tell you come here and you come to me. I pull you close to me you wince from my grip but i kiss you and you relax i ask you if you can take your clothes off. I stroke your thighs you shiver with excitement and hot-heat comes rushing in your private parts you curl your legs around me i lick your stomach you tighten your grip around my neck i brush kisses across your body you dig your nails into my back.I nibble on your ear you open your legs for easy access i lick your cunt you look up at me and just start to cry i cut you a little you lick at my chest i shiver with pleasure the cut closes up fast I'm astonished at how fast you heal. I make wonderful joyful lovemaking...you awake to find that your in your bedroom and your throbbing in places you didn't know you had your breasts ache your cunt throbs with aftershocks.Meghan hears my voice in her mind and she ripples with pleasure while i wrap my arms around you and whispers i love you well you fall asleep They End 1
this is Only for teens 17+18 an older it's inappriate for young readers
Comments
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I liked this. You used very good imagery, but use better spelling and grammar next time.
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Another intresting read. Very nicly worded and uses words i like to hear . I'm very much enjoying these from you.


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I like doing things in the rain and of course part of the title caught my attention. You have some good things working in here. Once you're able to go through and add some punctuation in spots, I think it can become better and possibly get more comments.


Ted E

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Ok, this will be better if you worked on your punctuation and sentence structure. Check your spelling and grammar usage and you should be good. Otherwise I like it and keep it up.





