Undeserving.

no one deserves those judgmental stares1

A contest entry

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  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 15, 2008

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    Oh my god I love this one! You are soooo right on it. No one does deserve that. I hope you place in this contest

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • briannnnn
    February 11, 2008

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    Wow, this is good, lol. It takes me a while to realize what it means, and I keep thinking about it. That's a good thing! Keep up the good writing.

    Anyways, good luck in the contest.

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


    • plastic spoon
      February 11, 2008
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      ha, thanks
      I wasn't trying to make people thing

      but ha, apparently I do =)


  • Blazing Writer
    February 6, 2008

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    Hmm, like others this sparks up a lot of questions. But also no one does deserve judgmental stares from others. Good luck in the contest.


  • theDARK1
    February 5, 2008

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    thought provoking as many need to read your statement as i know many judge without having basis to do so! good luck in the contest, DARK.


    • plastic spoon
      February 5, 2008
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      *nods* I'm just sick of them.
      thanks and same to you =]

      • theDARK1
        February 5, 2008
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        the good thing about me getting them, i just let it rub off and think to myself itz probably someone i don't need to know in the first place, hehehe!


  • Springs gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    ''there's no period on purpose.''
    did you actually understand that when I said '6 words only' I meant 6 words only, without anything extra, or what? xD


    • plastic spoon
      February 5, 2008
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      oi ... thought you ment in the story only?
      ha, i can take it out then.


      • Springs gold member
        February 5, 2008
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        nooo, I meant did you realise in the story that I didn't want people to put periods and commas and stuff?

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