In a way, it would be great being able to say my life is ruined... But as hard as I try I can't. For one thing, my life can't be ruined. Because I don't have one. And something that doesn't exist can't be ruined.. Yes, I do live day after day. Doesn't mean I have a life. Nothing good can ever come to me fom being alive. I don't even belong here. Not in this town nor in this state. Not in this country, nor in this continent, world, or universe. 1
It would be great, in a way, to be able to say I hate my life. But I can't no matter how hard I try. Not having a life makes it kind of hard to hate it. Sometimes I wonder if I even have a purpose for being here. I must. Why else would someone waste space by putting me in this already cramped world. 2
It's actually pretty hard to have to wait patiently for the day I can dissapear. It would make no actual difference really.. I barely exist anyways...
Author notes
Well.. I actually started writing this as a poem n stuff.. but it came out really really crappy, and more in the form of a short story or random piece.. Umm.. it kinda may sound a bit too dramatic but I wrote it when I was REEEALLY depressed so..
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you're 12 honey, dont lose hope, dont see yourself as nothing, you have a lot longer to go. youll be alright, things will improve.
as for the peice, you need more description. the key to short peices like this is feeling, nothing else. when you write something under 1000 words, unless you have real feeling and description within it, it dosent work. This tells me how you feel, but in a very matter-of-fact way, rather than making me feel the same. -
aww/......gabs.. you do have a life!! and you are important!! at least 2 me!! <3 =]
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Aww!! Thanks Gio!! ILU!
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