My Knight

His love is my kryptonite.1

His strength is my soul.2

He is my gentle Superman.

A contest entry

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  • theDARK1
    February 10, 2008
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    congrats on the silver trophy. that is deep in a lightened DARK way. i think that can be expanded even more into a longer poem or possibly a story (exclude the fact that many stories and movies already are based on superman). maybe that last idea is not a good one after all for i don't want people suing you, hehehe. congrats one more time, DARK.


  • Ted E Bare
    February 3, 2008

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    This was absolutley perfect and touching as I can tell it has to be for someone special in your life. I truly want to thank you for entering my "STACKERS" contest!

    Ted E