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I wish
I wish I
I wish I could
I wish I could help
I wish I could help you
I wish I could help you help
I wish I could help you help me
I wish I could help you help me help
I wish I could help you help me help you
I wish I could help you help me help
I wish I could help you help me
I wish I could help you help
I wish I could help you
I wish I could help
I wish I could
I wish I
I wish
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  • I Dare to Dream
    July 12, 2008

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    Holy crap! This was weird, I admit, but amazing too. Kinda poetic in a way too, especially ending and beginning it in "I".

    It sort of puts the image of despair in my head. Don't ask. Seriously.


  • MyZeroForever
    February 3, 2008
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    woah just stare at the word help.
    it looks weird.


  • MyZeroForever
    February 3, 2008
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    damn thats rad


  • xeu4iax
    February 3, 2008

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    that was cool!!!! it made me sad though. It kind of reminds me of when you're trying to tell someone something but are too hesitant to do so... you know?


    • Brittneh
      February 3, 2008
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      that's exactly how i was feeling when i wrote this. :]


      • xeu4iax
        February 3, 2008
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        heh then I'm glad I got in your head and know how you feel lol

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