Being Special

Your special; just like everyone else.

A contest entry

Do you feel that this is fluid? Is it an easy read? Are feelings expressed enough as to allow you as the reader to feel as the character feels?

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  • briannnnn
    February 10, 2008

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    This is so good. I love this a lot, it's so true.

    Good luck in the contest.

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • theDARK1
    February 5, 2008

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    even though you say i am, i feel excluded for i never consider myself special, guess i never will. it was a lovely sentiment. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • Naive.
    February 4, 2008
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    YAY.

    This made me smile! :] Great message.
    -jj


  • Springs gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    *you're
    Fine, so what's so special about me then? =)


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 3, 2008

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    Such a powerful sentence! I really do love that phrase. I think everyone in there own way is very special.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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