"So it's not gonna be easy. It's going to be really hard; We're gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me...everyday."1
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"I will love you forever," She whispered into his ear. Her warm breath on his neck made him shudder.
"I hope you mean it, because I don't think I could live without you," He said back to her, tears standing in his beautiful brown eyes.
He leaned in and kissed her then, conveying the emotions he was feeling through that kiss. In that moment, she knew that she would be with him forever, no matter what happened next.
He pulled away first and took her hand, and together they walked towards the doctors office.3
The answer that she had recieved from the doctor was the one that she had been dreading; she was going to have a baby, and knew that her family would never let that happen. Her family was rich; his was not. If her family let her go on with having the baby and starting a family with this man, they would completely disown her. She would have absolutely nothing; no money to start her new life and no way of getting a job. Her family had raised her to believe that she would never have to do an ounce of manual labor in her life, so therefore she hadn't.
When the doctor revealed the results, tears immediately sprang to her eyes. The doctor excused herself to give the couple some time alone.
He pulled her into a bear hug and tried desperately to tell her that everything would be okay and actually mean it. All she could do was sob and think of all of the bad things that would come of this.
"It's gonna be okay. I will never leave you. I want to be with you for the rest of my life, and I am willing to work as hard as I can to make this family work. All I need is a simple sentence from you telling me that you want the same thing." He pulled her chin up so that she was looking him in the face, and she saw that he meant every word that he said.
Suddenly, she knew everything that she had to do.
"I want to be with you, and start a family with you, and spend the rest of my life with you," She said, and he leaned down and kissed her.
It was the kiss that sealed the rest of their lives.
Author notes
Well,this is the first time I've ever written a story about love, so I hope that I didn't screw it up too badly.
The quote that I used was said by Ryan Gosling in "The Notebook".
A contest entry
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cute hehe
Very cute story. Good job. I loved the ending especially the last line. My favorite part was the beginning:
"So it's not gonna be easy. It's going to be really hard; We're gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me...everyday."
"I will love you forever," She whispered into his ear. Her warm breath on his neck made him shudder.
"I hope you mean it, because I don't think I could live without you," He said back to her, tears standing in his beautiful brown eyes.
He leaned in and kissed her then, conveying the emotions he was feeling through that kiss. In that moment, she knew that she would be with him forever, no matter what happened next.
He pulled away first and took her hand, and together they walked towards the doctors office.
As good as the ending. Though i am a sucker for a love story. you should space out the paragraphs and dialog better though. Other then that it was good. -
Touching...
This was a great piece. I love that movie The Notebook and that quote is amazing! I think that the story could have been a little longer and gave a little more info (like how old the couple is, their names stuff like that). Maybe u could add to it or expand it? But i felt the emotion and the love between the two people. Great job with this! keep up the great writing and thank u for entering the contest and good luck!
peace&love,
greeneyes -
This was so sweet, aww well done! This is lovely! Kais =)
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