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Silence comes in waves and erodes the soul.

A contest entry

I have no idea if this any good so please be honest

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  • Writing0Freedom
    February 3, 2008

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    Wow, this is so good! I like the concept of " silence comes in waves" and it is really neat to think of the soul eroding. Very creative, I like the entries that are original and out of the box, and this one is. Nice job!
    Good Luck!
    WritingFree