A Peak Into My Thoughts

I'm thinking at the moment. I'm sort of...lost in thought, I guess you could say. In a good way. I'm like this a lot lately.1

I kind of confuse myself when I'm like this. Because I always think of big things...2

Like, how amazing are humans? Have you ever thought about how humans make random sounds that come out of their mouth and millions of other people interpret that sound in many different ways. Like, I could make a sound that means beautiful, and millions of people could hear it and think of many other things; that falling stuff from the sky, another human, anything. And all of this just because I made some sound that another human, even a child, can understand.3

And there are billions of stories, all written and then they're able to be interpretted just by being looked at and then they could be said aloud? How intellegent do humans really have to be?4

I'm just at awe on this. I'm thinking so fast about all of these things; how can people write stories that make people imagine pictures in their head?5

So. Other than that, I'm feeling very amused. My cat is sitting on my lap. She's an amazingly beautiful creature, and she moves with grace and ellegance and understands me like no one else. She must me at least as intellegent as I am. She's purring, that beautiful low rumble in her. Her beautiful green eyes keep looking into mine and her calico fur is amazingly soft and clean, even though she's always outside. 6

She just stood up, full of grace and jumped off my lap about six feet. Now she's walking over to sit on the edge of my couch. My typing agrivated her.7

So I'm now thinking about how much my cat, Callie, really knows. And if I take her for granted.

Author notes

Uhm..I'm REALLY sorry if you didn't enjoy this. It's for a contest, and I hope this is...at least SOMEWHAT what you wanted! :] I could go on and on with this, and I hope it doesn't make me look like a dope. I entered because this is an amazing contest idea, Siby, and it made me think about what I'm thinking. I love that. A random song lyric from my favorite song? Beauty's on the inside. ;] [That's the lyric!]

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  • I Dare to Dream
    February 3, 2008

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    Wow. Beautiful, such thought provoking... thoughts!

    Seriously though, they were really good, with a lot of wisdom in it, and you ask questions that have run through my head so many times before. I love the last line!!!! There were a few spelling mistakes, you should check 'em out.

    P.S: Saw your new image, you look good with the glasses. Smart yet cute, totally you!


  • Elisabeth gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    These are beautiful, random thoughts to have. I enjoyed reading this. If it's for a contest, you'll need to tidy up some of your spelling mistakes, they don't detract from your piece, but they might cost you a placing. That would be a shame.*hugs*

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • miles of smiles
    February 2, 2008

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    Wow, this really made me think, Tay! We watched this video in Science on Friday about the 10 Smartest Animals and this totally kind of tied in to that. So I really did enjoy this. It was so much deeper than I thought it would be. I don't care if it's what that person wanted or not, because I like it anyway.

    [There were a couple of typos that I'm sure you didn't mean to make, so be sure to go back through and edit your misspelled words! Try reading it backwards to catch any minor spelling mistakes.]



    ♥SARAH


    • Taylor Renee
      February 2, 2008

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      Thanks! :)

      I'm really glad. Hah! That's kinda cool Thanks a ton Yeah, I just went back and fixed 'em Thanks!

      Thanks for the read & comment!

      I missed you!

      xoxo
      -♥-
      Tay


      • miles of smiles
        February 2, 2008
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        No problem! I haven't talked to you in forever, have you realized? What's up with you?



        ♥SARAH!


  • djk0925
    February 2, 2008
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    good

    Head stuck in science class?
    lolz


    • Taylor Renee
      February 2, 2008
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      lol! This doesn't have anything to do with science! I'm not smart enough for science!

      But thanks


  • Siby Anan
    February 2, 2008

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    I think it is very well stated. I like how you described your cat. That was a very nice ending to story. You've done a fantastic job!

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