forget to cry,remember to laugh.
A contest entry
- 6 words only by Springs.
330 points, ended February 16, 2008, 106 entries
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laughng and crying are both ways of cleansing the soul. Crying can become a negative loop of depression while laughter releases positive emotions and healing. Oft times it is good to forget crying so we can heal.
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I love this! I think those are some powerful words and a great little metaphor.
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'Eh. I think crying is good for you. But good job anyway!
Keep up the good work,
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I edited and changed it
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PS: Or the title: "Remember to Forget"
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I think you might want to rethink this one for at the moment you have seven words not to mention it creates some confusion for meaning as it reads; "Don't forget to cry, remember to laugh." I think it would be more provocative by dropping the word "don't" and would make it six words; "forget to cry, remember to laugh" and the title can be something like "Forget to Remember." Good luck in the contest!!!!!
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She actually only has six. if you look closely, her (his?) line has a comma between two words, but no gap! ''cry,remember'' making it one word.
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It's your contest and I was only trying to help
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