There are times I find myself
just sitting in the pouring rain
It's like my way of hugging you
when you are so far away1
I can't wait to get home
to see your precious smiling face
You're always in my heart and mind
as you're only a fantasy away2
Rose, you are my rain girl
every drop that falls it makes my day
You are my very loving reason
that I will never wish the rain to go away3
Author notes
This is a poem written some time ago!
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Poetry Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
500 points, ended February 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautifully Penned
This beautiful wet tribute to Rose and a loving story in verse.....You are a dynamic writer...just don't stop writing..... novy
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Novy, I have to say you are one of several people why I continued to write. You have always been so encouraging and I have finally branched outward some and that has been alot due to you with me coming back to SW
Ted E
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haha, I await your possible entry
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May get over there to do it, but I have a different idea when it comes to "war" in that particular setting
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ZOMG!!! This is so cute and beautiful. Its a way to win a heart lol. Great job!!! Thanks for entering and good luck.
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I truly appreciate the exciting comment that you left me and thank you kindly for itTed E
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my pleasure =)
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grr i'm so jealous lol. i love the poem, though. you are such a sweethear. she's so lucky to have you teddy bare.
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Thank you for being just as sweet with your commentingTed E
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Awww that's written so beautifully. I can tell that this woman means such a great deal to you by the words you use to describe her in this poem
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I will have to say that she has been the heavy influence of my writing and is the reason why I continued to do it as a hobby. I thought about just giving it up several times, so I do owe her more than I can ever repay her in life. Thank you for your heartfelt commentTed E
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