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"Tony," she said. "I am pregnant."

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  • Blazing Writer
    February 18, 2008

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    Poor Tony. He must be scared and happy and so many other things. But that's the joy in life.

    ~Blazing Mike~


  • briannnnn
    February 10, 2008
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    Good job! Hehe. I could imagine Tony's face! Lmao.

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • Kept As A Shadow
    February 10, 2008

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    This one is really good! I was looking through the entries, and this one really made come and comment on it. Wonderful


  • Midnightmare
    February 1, 2008

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    I am also assuming that Tony was shocked, haha. unless of course these people were a) not related sexually or TRYING to have a baby.
    well, i think this leaves one thinking about the different situations that this line may have been taken from.
    Good job, very interesting. I never even thought of something like this to enter in this contest (because im not that creative) so... yeah, good job! lol


  • Ted E Bare
    February 1, 2008

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    I bet you that was a shocker for Tony! But then again, if they didn't use protection then it shouldn't be much of a surprise(lol). Good luck in the contest!!!!!

    Ted E

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