Stop!

Stop! A word that goes unnoticed.

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  • Blazing Writer
    February 18, 2008

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    Thats so true. When you tell someone to stop they don't and it just gets on your damn nerves. lol well said my friend well said. Keep up the superb job!

    ~Blazing Mike~


  • briannnnn
    February 10, 2008
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    This is so true.

    Keep up the good work,
    -Brian.


  • theDARK1
    February 7, 2008

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    i can understand that. just that one word could have a larger meaning that many may never give it thought. itz like the word 'DARK' normally equates to negativty or scary in some way. but i like to make it seem to be a good thing. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • Midnightmare
    February 1, 2008

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    ohhhh.... this is so true.
    You dont really realise just how much it DOES go unnoticed these days until you actually think about it.
    You have really hit the nail on the head here... this is by no means a false statement.
    Whether you look at it from a political point of view, emotional point of view, societal, personal... the word just never seems to be recognised. or at least, if it is, it is ignored!
    good job!

  • HoneyAngel
    February 1, 2008
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    It really does go unnoticed... So very true.


  • Ted E Bare
    January 31, 2008

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    You are so right more than you can ever realize! I know you wrote it from an emotional standpoint as I can see many ladies on dates where guys may try to take it further than wanted. The word "stop" sometimes is turned into the word go for them. That makes it bad for all guys in general. You can go even further like a STOP sign when many are still rolling when they go through one. Or a traffic signal that is red as a motorist doesn't care and speeds through it as if it were green..."was I suppose to stop?" At least I do know the what "stop" means. I think you made your six words truly powerful here. Good luck in the contest.

    Ted E


    • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
      January 31, 2008
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      Thanks Yes that is all to true. I have seen so many not get what "stop" means on many levels. I never had entered one of these six word ones like this, but those words immediately hit my mind when I came to it.


      • Ted E Bare
        January 31, 2008
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        And a great job you did. I'm actually looking and commenting on all the entries in this contest now


  • crosscountry07 gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    do you mean goes? sorry....anyway, this is good for six words. I have done one of these before, it was fun! Good luck! -Liz

    • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
      January 31, 2008
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      Thanks! Yes that is what I meant there I never had entered any of these like this before. So I thought it would be fun to enter one.

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