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walking threw a crowd cover head to toe in disgusting matter. I try talking to the people but they ignore me. After about the twentyth try I noticed even my friends didn't recognize me. Then I look at my body and relize its a stark transparent grey. Am I a ghost then a beautiful girl that's seemed like the perfect girl for me. Like a girl from my dreams. She walked up to me o asked if I was dead she replied to me with no your in love. You broke the only self goal that you weren't suposed to break. Some how among the torment I noticed who she was. And she suddenly turned in to a black transparent figure. And ingulfed me. A split second later I'm lying in a bed next to the girl that I wanted most. About 5 years later and there was a ring on her finger. This can't be happening now. What happened. Then suddenly the door slams open. And she screams and a ski mask trenchcoated man with a sawed off shotgun shot her. And then the person identified themselves it was the ghost girl and she said. Now you see the consquence of love....1

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