Sometimes I wonder

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Sometimes I wonder,
I think,
I try to remember,
Things that I can't.1

The days pass slowly,
They just roll by,
As I sit in silence,
And start to remember.2

I do not sleep,
or eat,
I don't drink,
I only think.3

I see your face,
in my mind,
and I realize,
I have remebered.

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  • UnEdibleChick
    March 8, 2008

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    This is a great poem! The title just doesn't seem to fit this. I think it's a wonderful poem. It has no mistakes, well I don't see any but...yeah Good job and keep the great work up!


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    January 31, 2008
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    What I was picking up from this is that there was some sort of relationship that passes but you forgot what it was like. Then you really started to miss the memories so u pictured the persons face you remembered why you chose them. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


    • Beneath The Mask silver member
      February 1, 2008
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      that's exactly what I meant. Sometimes I wish that it was all a bad dream and me and him were still together. Thanks a lot for commenting.


      • Silent Raven
        February 12, 2008

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        KATIEBOB

        Can I just say that i wouldn't have EVER thought of that for what you went through... You seemed to bring ALL of your emotion into this one... I quite like it... Keep writing KATIE BOB :


        Okay, i think that is enough smiles until tomarrow...

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