Release

The sky is so inviting1

So exciting2

So open and so free3

And I have you closed away4

Like I’m teasing, every day5

You know, you could be free6

The key is sitting right there7

Too far, its so unfair8

But you fear to be free9

But there’s one thing you have to do10

You have to let me go to11

Before I set you free12

Author notes

At first the free thing at the end of the lines was an accident but then I decided I liked it so I kept going with it

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  • Andiness
    February 13
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    Wicked poem, I did love it so much! It means alot to you can tell that, that much is kind of obvious!! I think you are anamzing poet, please write more so I can read them!!
    -Andi


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    February 1, 2008

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    brilliant, letting go is the hardest part of life and love I belive but if we cannot learn to let go and release outselves from tha past how can we ever grow into the future and live in the present