The sky is so inviting1
So exciting2
So open and so free3
And I have you closed away4
Like I’m teasing, every day5
You know, you could be free6
The key is sitting right there7
Too far, its so unfair8
But you fear to be free9
But there’s one thing you have to do10
You have to let me go to11
Before I set you free12
Author notes
At first the free thing at the end of the lines was an accident but then I decided I liked it so I kept going with it
to like or not to like
Comments
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Wicked poem, I did love it so much! It means alot to you can tell that, that much is kind of obvious!! I think you are anamzing poet, please write more so I can read them!!
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brilliant, letting go is the hardest part of life and love I belive but if we cannot learn to let go and release outselves from tha past how can we ever grow into the future and live in the present


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I swear you are a genius
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