She places four pounds on the five pound trigger 1
Of the gun held to her head2
She’s ready to join her dreams3
Already long since dead4
“We don’t love you anymore”5
Said her sister and her mother6
“Here’s the gun if you want to die” 7
She took the gun from her father and brother8
She adds a pound and hears the shot9
As her body hits the floor10
She knows they won’t be sad11
Shes not stopping happiness anymore12
Author notes
I like the first four lines in my opinion it went downhill after that
yes?
Comments
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pretty good.
I think it's pretty good actually. It starts really good and then it gets sad. It's a beautiful little thing.
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